Assessment Practice Run- my partners design

For our assessment it's vital to do practice runs, this allows us to monitor our time and ensure we keep it to industry standards. It's also to ensure we find any problems with the design before the final assessment.  For our assessment we each play two rolls, the Stylist and the Designer.
We will do our assigned partners design on them.

My partners design.. 

My practice run.. 

I think my first practice at my partners design went very well, I have struggled with gaining height in the hair through the use of padding (rats) so I was extremely pleased of the outcome. I do however, think the overall look could be a lot smoother and tidier. My partner said she was very happy with the outcome which was a huge plus in this trial run. I believe the notes, design and feedback she has given me will allow me to create a fantastic final peice!